Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
To what extent do you agree?
Every person deserves a chance to improve themselves.Yes it is equally true that crime rates are increasing in a country day by day.There are some serious crimes in which prisoners are punished to spend their lives behind the bars for a lifetime.Crime does not only effect that particular person or their family,but equally makes an impression on the family of a criminal.If putting every prisoner behind the bars could have improved the situation, then there wouldn't be any further increase in the cases.
Though,there are two side of this and will discuss both in this essay.First,the labor market has many jobs that experience shortage of employees.Therefrore,if the convict with petty crime is allowed to work instead of imprisonment then they will benefit to the public because of their voluntary contribution.
Punished for the crimes like pickpocketing and shoplifting,a prisoner may learn more serious crimes like robbery of a bank,murder etc. from the serial criminals after the sentence in a jail.Thus it is important to separate them from main serial criminals and get involved by offering them a community work as a form of penalty.
On the other hand,it may happen that other criminals or prisoners also demand the same.In such cases,it becomes a responsibility of a government and police department to decide which prisoners actually deserve to do a work which can be beneficial for them as well as for others.There should be a separate provision made for the same.
The main point of argument here is that they are more likely to break the law again.People belive that criminals should serve their sentence in prison irrespective the type of crime.This will help them to understand the consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, well, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19784172662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17042817664 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.220617158 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.833333333 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.3333333333 20.7667163134 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185242088215 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740451771164 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535073464305 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856272008292 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517906372237 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 13.0946893788 200% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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