A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
Explain why would they be of interest to the students
Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Mr. Thompson,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in delivering a speech on international day organized by your esteemed education center.
To begin with, I would love to tell the students about the uniqueness of my country. Furthermore, I am willing to throw some light on sports, culture and local languages. I have plethora of data to speak on verities of spices and food consumed in India. Besides, politics can never remain untouched.
On top of it, my country was portrayed negatively in western media and i understand that young generation have keen interest in politics of my country. I have authentic data to support the positive aspects of politics of our country. I am sure children will be impressed to listen to it.
I will appreciate if I can get an excess to the projector as I am going to share few data and pictures that is not available on television. Also, sound system would be of great help in conveying whatever has been played on.
I hope you will accept my request, thanking you in advance.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, look, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79878988607 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0137803368 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3846153846 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20377661903 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628703999191 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497809991426 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957212301584 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436957617451 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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