It is true that, in this contemporary era, computers demand is being escalated in all over the world at an unprecedented rate. Moreover, it has numerous benefits that is why computers are being used in playing games, for office work and so on. According to my perspective, it has negative effects on our societies which we will discuss further.
To commence with, majority of children are playing various computers games whole day instead of doing studies and it impacts on children eyesight as well as on their academic score. Moreover, children are becoming more agreesive day by day because of fightings games. Another reason could be, children are taking interest in virtual world instead of real world that is why they have lack of confidence these days while talking face to face. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 73% youth are ruining their own time on Computers.
Looking on the other view, we have numerous ways for solving this. Firstly, attention should be given by parents and check on daily basis what they are doing. Some restrictions can be imposed by parents.Moreover, they can also encourage for playing outside games rather than virtual games. Secondly, campaigns should be started by administration regarding negative effects of computers through some live sessions, or advertisements.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, computers have lots of benefits in this world and we cannot stay longer without these technologies yet, me must understand that, it has disadvantages too like harm our eyes or acadmic scores and becoming aggressive, lack of confidence while talking e.t.c. In addition, we have some reasons too for solving this like, campaigns can be organised by government, parents should give focus and motivate them for playing outdoor games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... restrictions can be imposed by parents.Moreover, they can also encourage for playing ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23890784983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85453209903 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.094399888 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271207482765 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956125649104 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579813166979 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164775161853 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461569012579 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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