Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this day and age, with the advent of cutting-edge technology, many electricity gadgets have been manufactured and developed. Therefore, it has been debatable that whether computers are of the utmost importance invention of the last hundred years or not. From my point of view, I all the way disagree with this opinion because there are an arrays of inventions that are far more crucial
On the one hand, there is a host of compelling reasons to explain why computers are not the most critical invention during the last ten years. One evident strength is that besides computers, it also has the appearance of other vital creations such as smartphones. These play a pivotal role in people's lives since it is incredibly useful and helpful so as to to serve for different people's purposes. Take smartphones as a good example, thanks to producing smartphones, people can maintain mutual contact by calling or texting without any difficulties. In contrast, it is extremely inconvenient for people to use the computer to give a call or send message.
Furthermore, The development of AI technology also have made great contributions to the contemporary society when it enables people to work with more productiveness and effectiveness. This superior technology is a prerequisite for superior performance in some occupations. A good illustration is that medical field, AI will help doctor to carry out some surgical procedures with greater precision. As a result, it will contributed greatly to the growth of a nation.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that computers are not the only creation which is so important to people, others contemporary inventions are immensely significant to people's lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an array' or simply 'arrays'?
Suggestion: an array; arrays
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...greater precision. As a result, it will contributed greatly to the growth of a nation. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24175824176 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16998207857 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1793781105 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188290381535 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607117757827 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077758802271 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110905877429 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778100092822 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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