The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comaparisons where relevant.
The six Pie Charts elucidate the proportion of Water used for industrial, agriculture, domestic purposes in six different zones in the world.
Overall, it can be manifested that the highest number of Water used in agriculture side in the whole world, However, other to Sector least use but augmented Water used for the industrial sector in North America and Europe.
Firstly the highest proportion of water for agricultural use in the six zones which is 88 percent in Central Asia. Africa and Southeast Asia use water which is 84 and 81% respectively. moreover, in South America, almost three quarter use water and North America and Europe accounted with 70percent use water for agriculture purposes.
Secondly, the other two sectors use water in North America and Europe which is highest 48 and 53 percent for industrial use. However, for domestic use which is 13 and 15 percent respectively. in South America 19percent for domestic use and 10percent for industrial. Almost under 10 percent water for domestic use in Africa and Central Asia and also Southeast Asia. Although industrial use in Africa and Central Asia which is the lowest 7 and 5percent respectively and 12% in southeast Asia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10204081633 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74326633852 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448979591837 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6067259502 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223365553042 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120210961479 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687149814403 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186489482366 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679367404494 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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