Computers will become more intelligent than human being some people find it is a positive development while others think it is negative

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In this technological era,without computers all work will halt. Therefore...
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... computers all work will halt. Therefore,computers are now a crucial need of whole univers...
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...iverse and by each passing day computers become sharp and more knowelegabel. So,a...
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... become sharp and more knowelegabel. So,a fair amount of society say,it is a favo...
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...legabel. So,a fair amount of society say,it is a favorable development while others...
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...e others are opposit to this phonomenon.In the upcoming paragraphs this essay she...
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...onomenon.In the upcoming paragraphs this essay sheds light on both perspectives. ...
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...on both perspectives. To embark with,people take plethora of advantages from artifi...
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...f advantages from artifical intelligence..First of all,computers are able to do ev...
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...advantages from artifical intelligence..First of all,computers are able to do every w...
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...rom artifical intelligence..First of all,computers are able to do every work related to st...
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...ob and make it easy and fast for humans.For example,the calculations which are done...
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... it easy and fast for humans.For example,the calculations which are done by AI are m...
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...llions of equations in seconds. Therfore,technology is in the favore of human if the use it...
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...is in the favore of human if the use it in a right way. Although,computers have several b...
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...the use it in a right way. Although,computers have several benefits to world,some dra...
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...computers have several benefits to world,some drawbacks are also originated by them.F...
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...e drawbacks are also originated by them.Firstly,unemployment is a major problem due to ...
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...acks are also originated by them.Firstly,unemployment is a major problem due to heavy usage o...
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... heavy usage of technology. For instance,in many organisations and companies all re...
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...oftwares instead of manually by workers.As a result,work load on computers have i...
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...stead of manually by workers.As a result,work load on computers have increased and d...
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...rkers.As a result,work load on computers have increased and demand of new employe...
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...sed and demand of new employees declined To conclude, despite having advatages ,t...
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... To conclude, despite having advatages ,there are most concerning drawbacks of t...
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...most concerning drawbacks of technology.No doubt it makes the life of human being ...
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...several facilites provided by it yet it accelerate the unemployment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57603686636 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.86179514509 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672811059908 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.439583516 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.857142857 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8571428571 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173251722873 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737678438276 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322784081639 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888784431654 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527981858921 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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