In Some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, after a certain age, people prefer to live alone rather than live with their family. As compared to past in some countries, their citizens desire to live by themselves. This essay will describe why it is not positive progress.
Living alone has always been a dream of every teenager to enjoy their life without any parent’s restrictions. When people start making a good amount, they start to do things from bucket list and living alone is always a dream of every singles life. As they can do whatever they want, for example, if one wants to do party until midnight, they can not do while living with parents, but if they live alone, they can invite their friends as many times as possible. While living with parents, there are chances of restrictions and rules in a lot of things like, sometimes they can not eat their favourite food because food has been cooked already, they can not go to a party with friends very often, they can not I sometimes in their house. To avoid these limits, people start living on their own. Moreover, they can make their own rules to live. They can go outside whenever they want, and they can invite anybody to their house whenever they want; they can design their house by their taste.
However, live with parents is way more beneficial than live my own. Live with parents will decrease expenses to almost less than 50% as house rent or mortgage, groceries, utilities, and all the expenses will be less than living alone. Additionally, one can have love from family. If someone decides to live alone, they will not have anyone to talk with or share feelings with, but their parents will always be there for them if they live with family. Also, if they fall sick or anything happened to them, their family will always be ready to take care of them without any expectations. Even if they have to follow the rules and routine, but it is beneficial to them only.
To conclude, I would like to say, living alone will bring fun in life but at the cost of love by parents. So in my way of thinking, I would consider that if living alone is not necessary, people should avoid it and live their happy life with their beloved ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'singles'' or 'single's'?
Suggestion: singles'; single's
...living alone is always a dream of every singles life. As they can do whatever they want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22956200756 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9140588213 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158059685063 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728549114021 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545025443263 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133641944902 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661773539307 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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