Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Protecting water sources is a precondition for long-term environmental protection. The industrial activities of continuously exploiting water from different sources such as rivers and seas are the main culprit behind serious water pollution, hence a deterioration in both people and animal ‘s daily life and health.
The primary reason of this alarming pollution is the high volume of regular water exploitation . these days, a growing number of factories take a huge amount of fresh water from the environment but return with dirty by-product replete with billions of bacteria and microorganisms. In addition, the frequency of oil leaks and spills is also attributable to water contamination. Ships and boats whose mission are transporting these material to the factories accidentally spoil the sea with thousands of oil liters every day , hence exacerbating the current problem.
Consequently, water pollution takes a heavy toll on the whole ecosystem, including human and animal living in it. In particular, polluted water from lakes can flow into the underground soil of nearby fields or farms, thus causing a ripple effect for both industrial and agricultural activities. Water pollution from toxic substances can additionally disrupt the process of photosynthesis , therefore posing a great threat to the survival of nearby trees and animals. To cite an example, the 2016 Vietnam marine life disaster caused by a company named Formasa was the reason behind the millions of fish deaths in a wide range of beaches in Thanh Hoa. Furthermore, when this company released water waster into the seas, people living nearby were diagnosed with serious diseases when they used this source, some of them had to stay in hospitals for a long time. What is more, the effects of water pollution are insidious to human because only far later can they notice the deterioration in their health.
To conclude, industrial involvement is mainly to blame for this kind of pollution and so far a colossal loss of animal’s lives and the decline in people ‘s health are at the expense of its repercussions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in particular, kind of, such as, on the whole, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30630630631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00211182048 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3722511341 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.923076923 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304647294213 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101697744711 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532577983516 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164962547195 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608098108187 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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