Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Everyone wants to possess a wealthy fortune and live a happy life without any controls from their boss or other powerful people. Consequently, many people nowadays choose to be self-employed rather than be hired by a company or corporation. When being a boss of themselves, individuals can have more independence as well as opportunities to challenge and prove themselves. However, this phenomenon also has some drawbacks, which can lead to bankruptcy or have negative impacts on humans' mental health.
To start with, many people from different ages decide to run their own business because of the ideal freedom and chances they have from this kind of employment. People don't have to obey others' rules or satisfy their influential directors and they can decide on their own which is the best for their life. Moreover, being self-employed offer many opportunities for individuals, especially the young, to challenge themselves and gain invaluable experience from their own failure.Therefore, people can become more well-rounded and cool-headed when facing difficulties in their life. Furthermore, to be said, this is a perfect occasion for people to show their talent and prove their ingenuity with their family and friends, which can also bring pride and happiness to their life.
Nevertheless, besides offering individuals many independence and possibility, this trend can make them become bankrupt and cause extremely negative consequences. Not everyone has the talent to organise and operate a business on their own. A non-professional director can make his company go bust because of his lack of experience and knowledge. Besides, in order to bring profits and be respected by the company's staff, the board must be a person who is smart in both communicating and managing his employees. Therefore being a boss of themselves is a real challenge which has a lot of requirements and if they are not a determined and strong-minded people, this difficult job can bring plenty of negative impacts on their mental health, which can also lead to abnormal mentality and suicidal
In conclusion, thanks to the ideal independence and opportunities that "being your own boss" offers to individuals, more and more people choose to be self-employed. However, this phenomenon has chances to cause greatly unexpected consequences to their mental health and thus their normal life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39037433155 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17552966853 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502673796791 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.7592890997 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25836817528 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110325043717 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152114089277 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182785972551 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671329930325 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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