It is irrefutably, Tourism plays a vital role in the progress and earning revenue for any nation while, The international traveling has a plethora of the benefits for both travelers as was country. there are some merits to it ; nonetheless, I personal believe drawback supersedes the benefits.
To Commence with, Although there are myriad of benefits to international travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country. But the first and foremost one advantages is improve the economical status of the nation. To elaborate ,In this modern time population and peoples demands are increased, while the most of the reach people opine that to visit a overseas country. Although, The most of the travelling agency improve the travelling rant as well as local residential and hotel booking rate. as impact local public earn the more money and leave the happy lifestyle. To be considering the nation economic status improved because of the different country people are visit and stay for the weekend . To quote an example, It is clearly demonstrate by "Times of India" 60 to 70 Percentage of the people prefer to visit the overseas country.
Moving to the flip side, Despite having plethora of the drawback , according to second school of thought sometime international traveling have bad impact on the country as well as traveler. Due to which another significant disadvantage is effect on the environment. To illustrate the people are visit the new adventure place and fell happy and cheerless Nonetheless, as impacts people are cut down the tees and natural recourses such as forest and many other places to develop ma restaurant and resorts for the income. it has a bad impact on weather to exemplify the survey of the government in 2015 50% of trees are cut down for the develop a high standard accommodation and visiting place. There fore it has big impact on our country natural resources.
In the conclusion , This essay would like to pen down my self by reiterate from the international travelling have beneficial for the local people while there is advantages outweigh the disadvantage is huge effect on the environmental and natural resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, well, while, as for, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12676056338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92271049488 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523943661972 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3304868231 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313519923054 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977334920459 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105813247384 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183864824272 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525647436857 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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