The more budget should be allocated by the authorities to the public welfare services like education, medical and transportation instead of artistic skills such as music and painting. If questioned, i largely support this notion. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.
Out of all the reasons for spending money to the developement of public sactor,the foremost one is that, it is a primary need of each and every mankind of this era. By this i mean that, the collected tax from the citizen is wisely spend by the government if it is used for the facilities which is used by all the puplils. Arts is not a subject of all people's interest and by develping them the revenue of center would be unequally spend.
Moreover, adminstration has abundent problem already in environment and society. If this issues will not addressed, the vast threat to the world. To elaborate, there are lot of people suffring from the starvation, poverty, vulgarity and pollution in both developed as well as developing nations. Hence, this all the question will be solved first. For example, according to one survey 12% of people in USA is sleeping without a food at night.
However, i would not overlook other side, too. Developlment of artistic field is also a vise spend for government after fulfilling all fundamental requirement. Government could also gain a revenue from this high demanding places. To compete with this modern world it is also better to use some part of budget to the arts.
To conclude, government should look first on basic need of this society and after satisfying it the arts also a best field to develope. if budget would proper planned for this both areas is a wise advice to the center rather than choosing specific one.
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Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, i mean, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89898989899 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77801651867 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1630849583 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5882352941 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168784391959 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432649924143 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542584903768 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935036634096 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557279826908 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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