Given graph gives an interesting glimpse of the information showing usage of oil by several consumers from 2009 to 2030.The data has been calibrated in millions.
It becomes quite apparent after having a glance at the given graph that in 2009 US was on the top the list for consuming oil by ten millions. However, it remain constant until 2015 but afterwards it fell rapidly to four million until 2030. Moving further on Western Europe along with Japan started where US left and than it clearly seen that it decline sharply till 2030. Nevertheless, China arise with two million in 2009 and move upward until 2015 by three million as well as it stabilize till 2030. Analyzing further on Middle East it uplift dramatically throughout the time.
To cap it all, it is vividly seen that only US begin with highest millions of barrels consumed as well as it also decrease speedily. Whereas, all other nations did not change that rapidly.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... by several consumers from 2009 to 2030.The data has been calibrated in millions. ...
^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...suming oil by ten millions. However, it remain constant until 2015 but afterwards it f...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ng with Japan started where US left and than it clearly seen that it decline sharply...
^^^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (China) must be used with a third-person verb: 'arises'.
Suggestion: arises
... sharply till 2030. Nevertheless, China arise with two million in 2009 and move upwa...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...China arise with two million in 2009 and move upward until 2015 by three million ...
^^
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uplifts'?
Suggestion: uplifts
...30. Analyzing further on Middle East it uplift dramatically throughout the time. To...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
..., it is vividly seen that only US begin with highest millions of barrels consumed as well as...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d as well as it also decrease speedily. Whereas, all other nations did not change that ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... nations did not change that rapidly.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83850931677 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45702227313 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5519652927 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225890943358 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840318903502 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987169496987 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161840542167 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119933828036 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... by several consumers from 2009 to 2030.The data has been calibrated in millions. ...
^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...suming oil by ten millions. However, it remain constant until 2015 but afterwards it f...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ng with Japan started where US left and than it clearly seen that it decline sharply...
^^^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (China) must be used with a third-person verb: 'arises'.
Suggestion: arises
... sharply till 2030. Nevertheless, China arise with two million in 2009 and move upwa...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...China arise with two million in 2009 and move upward until 2015 by three million ...
^^
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uplifts'?
Suggestion: uplifts
...30. Analyzing further on Middle East it uplift dramatically throughout the time. To...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
..., it is vividly seen that only US begin with highest millions of barrels consumed as well as...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d as well as it also decrease speedily. Whereas, all other nations did not change that ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... nations did not change that rapidly.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83850931677 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45702227313 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5519652927 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225890943358 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840318903502 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987169496987 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161840542167 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119933828036 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.