Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that people who pursue and continue with a particular career choice early in life find it more rewarding than those switching jobs regularly. Whereas there are persuasive arguments to the contrary, it is my personal belief that job-hopping would provide people with a greater sense of fulfillment.
On the one hand, there are several merits to embarking on a career early and remaining on it for a long period of time. To embark on, workers would benefit from job prospects, which include promotion opportunities and pay rises. As experience and commitment are taken into consideration when deciding who to get promoted and who to be dismissed, those who are loyal to a certain company stand a higher chance of moving up the career ladder and earning a lucrative salary. Furthermore, there are various perks for employees that keep the same job, namely sick leave, holiday entitlement, a generous pay package, yearly bonuses, etc. On top of that, some are also able to establish a network of partners and have supportive work colleagues.
On the other hand, I believe that those who change career paths experience greater fulfillment. Firstly, as they work in different working environments, they are able to acquire a wide range of new skills and have the opportunity to put the knowledge gained from previous employment into practice as well, which makes them more flexible and capable of dealing with any challenges they face in work and life. Secondly, selecting a steady job seems to be an overwhelming decision for youngsters who are yet to have relevant experiences. Hence, being exposed to various fields, young people can figure out their strengths and weaknesses as well as the most suitable profession that fits their competence and interest.
By way of conclusion, while maintaining the same profession has its own benefits, I reaffirm my state that job-hopping would definitely guarantee people’s job satisfaction in later life.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-14 | huyen nguyen ngoc | 78 | view |
- It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 84
- Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century so protecting them is a waste of resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it Write at 89
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...er early and remaining on it for a long period of time. To embark on, workers would benefit fr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1308411215 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88078964211 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613707165109 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0742596015 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.25 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3020288642 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103513092318 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786048061505 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183709265966 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597845752573 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.