The graph below describes about the percentages of newe coverage of different fields of two countries of 100 days
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of various fields for coverage of news in U.S and europe during 100 days
Overall, it can be seen that in both countries other foreign/defence and immigration were highly covered areas. The news on the topic of Russia and election was only covered bg U.S media ,while in europe little percentages of news was introduced on electronic fraud.
In U.S ,most emphasis was done by media on other foreign/defence and immigration, accounted for 17%. The almost similar newes was covered on the topics of fitness for office, intil trade, economy and personal background recorded to be 3% ,4%and 5% consequently. However, media was concerned on the health care news , 12% of news covered on this. same amount of fraction showed by others and Terriorist Threat (17%).
Moving forward, in European media least popular sectors were fitness for office,Terrorism, other domestic, health care, personnel background and election and fraud ,always remained under 6%., Whereas economy, immigration and intil trade were on same proportion just above one tenth. 21% newes covered on other froeignidefence, which was highest news proportion in europe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37837837838 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9630485328 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5757147743 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749352681266 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334687107759 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04998024197 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673306688211 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682238634812 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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...d election was only covered bg U.S media ,while in europe little percentages of ne...
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...ctronic fraud. In U.S ,most emphasis was done by media on other foreign/defen...
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...n, accounted for 17%. The almost similar newes was covered on the topics of fitne...
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...nd personal background recorded to be 3% ,4%and 5% consequently. However, media wa...
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...ia was concerned on the health care news , 12% of news covered on this. same amoun...
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... popular sectors were fitness for office,Terrorism, other domestic, health care, personne...
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...,Terrorism, other domestic, health care, personnel background and election and fr...
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...sonnel background and election and fraud ,always remained under 6%., Whereas econo...
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...ays remained under 6%., Whereas economy, immigration and intil trade were on same...
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...covered on other froeignidefence, which was highest news proportion in europe.
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...fence, which was highest news proportion in europe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37837837838 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9630485328 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5757147743 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749352681266 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334687107759 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04998024197 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673306688211 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682238634812 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.