Today, in most of the nations there are numerus reasons of plants and animals are falling each year. This essay would shed lights on the valid reasons and do analysis to change the situation in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To comments with, Global Warming plays a huge role in plants and creatures reducing every 12 months. However, humans are constructing buildings even in forest area so they are taking over there homes in nature. Some of the animals are getting hunted by cruelly people and they also cutting the trees for creating furniture. Nevertheless, if there were no trees left in jungle area than there will be no enough rain and it will affect both plants and animals. Moving further, industries play a very crucial role in terms of polluting environment as every year, they throw tons of wastage such as raw material, chemicals and plastic. It creates immense, water pollution and this water flows to rivers, lakes and ocean. In fact, most plants and animals are dependent on river water and it will harm there body and they will slowly die.
In order to tackle such situations, we can urge to citizens to not to throw waste in water as it is prime need of living beings. Secondly, we can also request to government to pass few strict laws regarding no-construction zone in forest area along with, increase fines for unnecessary cutting trees and killing animals. Few animals species can be relocated to a safer place for there better lifestyle. There are few species of plants which can be rarely grew in this mondernized cities so we can transfer it to a good environment.
To cap it all, both plants and animals are equally important as human beings so we should give them a proper space and good environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... are taking over there homes in nature. Some of the animals are getting hunted by cruelly p...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
... cutting trees and killing animals. Few animals species can be relocated to a safer pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80602006689 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5218855027 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3838078415 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219720114611 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739299646943 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575053326381 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136741521372 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552552821781 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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