People buy a product if it fullfills their need there is no need for advertisement. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
In modern era, technology is increasing day by day and advertising is a part of technology too. Some people do not know very well about the product, owing to advertisement they know this. This notion have both pros and cons. I shed some light on both views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are plethora of masses who says advertisement is not necessary to buy a good product that they need. Nowadays, everyone know the difference between good or bad product so there is no need of advertisement. Moreover, some business man and companies give more money TV channels for advertising their products but their products are not good in quality. Channels should show only necessary or good quality things rather than others.
On the flip side, some individuals think advertisement is important to know about good products. Some good products are not famous. Due to advertisement, these products can come in front of people. For example, one person buy a product that he does not know anything about the product, if he watches advertisement of that product, this give knowledge regarding this product to him. Therefore, advertisement is also beneficial for masses.
To sum up, although, some companies sell their fake products, due to this masses do not fulfill their needs, yet advertisements become aware the individuals about the products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are the individuals about the products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10762331839 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93185077372 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1607107552 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3571428571 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266122282797 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884080859023 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693110017174 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153331159186 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062028422958 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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