In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining. Why do you think is it happening? How to solve this issue?
There is no doubt that over the last decades, the fauna and flora in many countries around the globe is diminishing at a worrying rate. This essay will shed some light on the reasons of this and propose solutions to mitigate this problem.
One of the main causes of this phenomenon is deforestation. Indeed, the clearing of forests for the development of civilizations has resulted in the destruction of habitats for many animals and the depletion of their food supply. Deforestation with no regards to the conservation of unique plant species has resulted in the extinction of many of them. To tackle this issue, the government and responsible authorities should regulate the clearing of land, and promote reforestation. This should result in an improvement in the ecosystem and wild life.
Another major contributing factor is climate change. With the rise in the earth's temperature due to an increase in carbon emissions, numerous plants and animals are unable to adapt to their new environmental conditions. For instance, a subtle rise in sea water temperature can destroy planktons which are the primary food source of certain sea creatures. To combat this problem, the countries with the most carbon emissions should undertake efforts to curb them for the greater good. As a result, the effects of man driven climate change on the ecosystem would be mitigated.
In conclusion, two of the main causes of the decline in animal and plant species are deforestation and climate change. However, these can be managed through tougher regulations around land clearing and limiting gas emissions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...is climate change. With the rise in the earths temperature due to an increase in carbo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19791666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88208458495 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1984108984 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193512280677 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641687134544 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476028656541 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983638403195 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597388519884 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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