rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities shouldnot teach arts subject,like philosphy and history and only other practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment? to what extent do you agree or disagree?
A university should teach practical degree courses instead teaching arts subject like philosophy and history. Increasing university fees and chances of getting less employment. Due to the subject taught. This essay will argue between rising university fees and employment.
Increasing fees and getting employment for graduates, for some people says that teaching arts subject gets job for only some people. In the stream of philoshy and history they get only in teaching sector jobs. IN our country mainly teaching jobs are under the philosophy and history students. Most of the students become lectures in colleges, schools by the help of arts stream. IN most of the schools the teacher will teaches history subject.by the end only few people are interested to do these kind of jobs.
On the other end, teaching practical degree courses that's have maximum chance of emploment.Instead of learning arts. Learn degree courses it get's more employability by the help of degree courses. In lot of university there are outgoing batches, in outgoing batches comparing to arts students and practical degree courses mostly the practical degree students are placed in the recent year. It has said by the local survey conducted by the university people. Now a days most of the students are interested to study practical courses. In olden days all the government jobs are based on arts subjects.Now,practical courses takes place and gives more jobs. and rising fees in the university for both of them are might difficult, There are less competition arts and more in practical courses. Most of the private companies are looking forward for practical based course students. By the end practical degree courses have getting more employment chances.
This essay has argued between the rising fees in some universities and getting less employment for graduates. In between the arts and practical degree courses, My opinion is most of the practical degree courses gets more employability comparing to the arts students.
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- rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities shouldnot teach arts subject like philosphy and history and only other practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment to what 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28526645768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84299231802 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423197492163 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9817184566 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446676024223 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144609460505 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836304515041 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297424006875 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229981495408 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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