After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, many students who have graduated prefer chasing their dream by seeking a job that they love while others place more importance on taking a well-paid job. In my opinion, I believe that job satisfaction and job with high salaries should consider equally.
There are several reasons to explain why graduate students should find the career that they love. First of all, if you love the job, you will do not need a reason to get up early in the morning to work. People who enjoy their job look forward to going to their workplace every morning with a high spirit. Moreover, people who prefer their job will help them gain more experience because they work with full energy and passion. This makes them become experts in their field and have a high chance of success in their career path in the future.
On the other hand, if you pick up a job with a high income, you will be able to stable meet basic requirements in your life such as paid living costs and entertainment. When you have money, you can focus on other problems like taking care of family, doing your hobby without any worries or stress. In addition, some people just focus on following their dream, yet still do not mention it in their allowance which may cause a financial burden for their family. For example, people who pursue art, despite their passion, their economy still can not support for themself. As a result, this pressure gradually decreases their passionate and they will seek out another job to maintain their daily life.
In conclusion, choosing job satisfaction give students lots of advantage to students on better future, while picking up a job pay the best salary is a good choice to work in long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69463087248 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33309335969 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60067114094 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8536400542 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6923076923 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219718599906 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090141324009 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400896494374 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146071203182 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308743785174 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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