The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary settings, environment issues become hot topics. Therefore, according to some individuals , the major solution for these to live uncomfortable lives by present decade for the beneficiary of upcoming generation. I completely disagree with the statement and reasons are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, environment causes become at peak due to numerous activities which is done by human beings. The first and foremost cause of this problem is pollution which is increased with rapid speed day by day. There are plenty of activities which are done by individuals which leads to pollution such as maximum use of private vehicles. Nowadays, every individual have their own automobiles which they use on their daily basis even for short distance. The automobiles release numerous gases such as carbon dioxide, methane and so on. To solve this criteria, people should use public vehicles or CNGs consumed vehicles which are eco-friendly and do not release harmful gases. Therefore, by this way, individuals live their lives in comfort zone to.
In addition, the another factor behind this notion is proliferation of industrialization. In present decade, industries set up in every town and the chimneys of these industries release numerous gases which leads to air pollution and cause of acid rain. Therefore, legal authorities should passes law for factories to purify the gases before release. Furthermore, one more factor of this notion is inclined utilisation of plastic. Individuals use plastic bags for carry their bit of laguage. Due to which, they litter these bags on land after their use. However, these plastic bags neither be burn nor be decomposed. Therefore, individuals should use paper or jute bags on the place of plastic because these bags are also eco-friendly and do not cause any environmental issue.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that individual do not have necessity to live their lives without comfort for the advantages of upcoming generation because there are numerous ways to decline environmental issues such as utilisation of eco-friendly items in all manners.
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'pass'
Suggestion: pass
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4024024024 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0008499758 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3424761917 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6842105263 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148522971453 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444845554714 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636178003884 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127348324335 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795073327867 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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