Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people say that history courses are important to the student as they teach them about the past and provide them with deep knowledge about historical achievements, so all students should take a course related to history. However, I do not agree with that stance and believe that students should not be forced to take a history course for three reasons.
First of all, an extra course which is not related to the main subject of a student background can make a student demotivated as it is an additional course that the student has to pass to get their final degree. For example, a doctoral student, who is struggling with his departmental courses, labs, practical study, and so on can feel demotivated if he fails in the history course which is not related to his doctoral degree. On the other hand, all the students who have passed from the same doctoral background in the past, have faced less stress as they had to take a course less than the present student. By giving the present students an extra burden of a history course, it can demotivate them and can force them to leave their study without completing.
Second of all, a history course has no purpose in the job market and any time spend in the subject will be futile. For example, in the present job market, HR officers look for students who have extra knowledge like software skills, basic and practical knowledge in the core subjects and do not care about any knowledge on history. So, a student who will has less subject to study will find additional time to increase their skill by learning software or doing some practical work and can increase their chances of getting a job.
Finally, taking an extra subject will increase the cost of study and it will demotivate some students to leave their study. An extra subject will need an extra teacher, an additional classroom which in turn will increase the tuition fees and will force some students to leave their studies. For example, in my country, a few years back government had set a rule that all students in class 5 or above must have a personal computer at their personal expense. A computer in my country cost a lot of money and for that reason, a third of students had left their study. After recognizing the mistake, the government immediately removed the rules which then motivated the old student to join their courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, third, as to, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71186440678 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46989032404 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443099273608 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4164707104 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225774943722 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100364767713 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601118943689 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16154123366 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623665870325 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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