People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should ben done to encourage people to protect the environment?
Many catastrophic natural disasters occured recently have made people realize how crucial the environment is to us. Tsunamis, earthquakes, hurricanes, etc. are responsible for huge numbers of casualties every year. Humans also have to depends on Mother Nature in certain industries such as agriculture and tourism. Unfortunately, many individuals are still ignorance refuse to take responsibility to protect the environment. From my point of view, there are two major reasons explaining this reckless behaviour. In this essay, I plan to point out why people are being so indifferent and propose some feasible solutions to these complicated issues.
Initially, the first reason is that many people are uneducated on the on-going environmental problems, especially those in developing countries. Citizens of these countries consider pollution and resources depletion complicated and are problems of the future. They are unaware of the impacts that plastics, sewage, or chemical toxins have on nature. A research carried out in a rural area of Vietnam have shown that 60% of residents do not know why they should stop using plastic bags. Consequently, people keep treating the environment poorly, which will eventually result in its deterioration.
Another factor contributing to people's lack of actions toward the environmental problems is that the eco-friendly lifestyle is quite hard to maintain. Humans have gotten used to such reckless lifestyle of using plastic straws, plastic cups, and dumping wastes into the ocean. Humans have gotten used to harnessing nature to satisfy our own needs such as food, drinks and wants such as clothes. Moreover, the price of a environmentally-friendly lifestyle is definitely not affordable. Rather than buying costly metal straws and tote bags, people would pick plastic straws and plastic bags foe their cheap price. All in all, many individuals cannot keep up with the sustainable lifestyle due to either their preference or finance.
To tackle this complex issue, the government and organizations should put out campaigns and advertisements in order to educate citizens more on the on-going environmental problems. They should also invest more on manufacturing eco-friendly goods so that these products become less of a financial burden and impose certain restrictions on the act toward nature.
To sum up, there are many reasons why people can be irresponsible for preserving the environment, two of which being lack of knowledge and difficulties in maintaining a sustainable lifestyle. Countries' government should take action immediately so that citizens pay more attention to the pollution crisis that we are currently facing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'depend'.
Suggestion: depend
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... that many people are uneducated on the on-going environmental problems, especially thos...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...ation. Another factor contributing to peoples lack of actions toward the environmenta...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...such as clothes. Moreover, the price of a environmentally-friendly lifestyle is d...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bags'' or 'bag's'?
Suggestion: bags'; bag's
...e would pick plastic straws and plastic bags foe their cheap price. All in all, many...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to either their preference or finance. To tackle this complex issue, the govern...
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Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57493857494 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18878029354 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58230958231 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1715380553 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.136363636 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17981069808 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463382829869 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527276576973 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960748742309 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061761041359 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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