Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
comics, books, radio, television, film, theatre
With the advent of technology, plenty of the state of the art media, alongside the former ones, inform people about the events and become new ways to communicate information. The forthcoming paragraphs will elaborate on the positive and negative sides of books, radio, and television, explaining why I believe radio is the most effective one.
The most famous kind of media since thousands of years ago is books. Paper books can be a permanent source of information because they are strong enough to withstand the passage of time, and they can be accessible for many centuries. Besides, They would be the most precise form of information because the writers and authorities consider and revise the authentication of their information very accurately before publishing. On the downside, they are vulnerable mainly to the fire, and many priceless books have been burned. In addition, books cannot be edited; therefore, if any mistake happens or needs to change after publishing, there is no alternative way to correct it or update them.
The most popular media of 21 century can cover information instantly for a large number of people at the same time. While TV can visualize the information and cover it simultaneously, radio represents audio, and it can help you listen to it even when you are driving without any concern regarding any distraction. This ability to transfer the information as fast as possible to the audience makes it an Up-to-date form of communicating information worldwide, and individuals will access a wide variety of information at any place. In addition, because of many limitations such as eyesight problems or illiterate people can benefit from them. The drawback of these media would be, some reports gathered by an uneducated reporter might not be valid, or some information in favour of a political party would be changed.
In conclusion, I believe that radio is the most way of communicating information because it can update instantly and can be accessible to everyone at any time.
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| 2021-08-21 | alpha2006sh | 78 | view |
| 2021-08-21 | alpha2006sh | 73 | view |
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- Plastic bags bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What damage does plastic do to the environment What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem 94
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your ow 73
- Some people believe that professional athletes serve as positive role models for young people while others argue that their behavior both on and off the field can have negative influences Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification Discuss both these views and give your opinion 73
- Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today What are the causes of this problem and how could the situation be improved 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...the advent of technology, plenty of the state of the art media, alongside the former ones, infor...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...ate them. The most popular media of 21 century can cover information instantly for a l...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ury can cover information instantly for a large number of people at the same time. While TV can v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1367781155 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9948481122 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559270516717 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.2131133265 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255852580195 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899512606672 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387280746298 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160327549882 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138966091296 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.