Some people say that the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. Others say its purpose is to prepare individuals to achieve personal ambitions.
Discuss these views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the purpose of educational system. While some think that the main aim of schools is to educate people so that they serve society, I side with those who believe that the purpose of education is to bring up well-formed personalities.
On the one hand, people are born to be useful to society. Universities and institutions give an opportunity to students to help other people by leading students to their future career. Therefore, doctors, nurses and surgeons sometimes sacrifice their health in order to help others. As an example due to COVID-19 during the pandemic, doctors had to work excessively. Besides, graduates are believed as the social agents who bridge the society and government in terms of making society based policy. Hence, the national government urges the universities to enrich the students with the sense of nationalism in order to educate a generation that cares about society. For instance Indonesian Government requires universities to provide nationality subject for first-year students.
On the other hand, if a person is not formed as an individual, he will not be able to serve society in a proper way. In other words individuals need to build themselves and achieve their own goal in order to give something to others. For example if person`s aim to be a businessman and philanthropist at the same time they need to build professional career first in order to donate money. If people do not work on themselves and first of all do not realize their dreams, they will never be able to be fit for society.
To sum up, I personally think that purpose of education preparing well-developed personality, however knowledge without devotion equals to zero. It is the sense of devotion which encourage individuals to achieve their education for the sake of benefiting others
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10299003322 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97567241622 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3920267229 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244408284051 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801207574511 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599173724578 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153243118521 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051023958618 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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