Some people laws should be passed to assess what nutrition and food choices to improve public health. Others think it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When the issues of health protection come into view, there exist controversial opinions. Some individuals believe that some policies should be established in order to raise the strength of the citizens’ health. Meanwhile, others hold the notion that these rules can be too complicated for consumers as well as business owners to follow. From my point of view, the benefits of health laws outweigh the drawbacks and the writing below will discuss the opinion.
Initially, the food laws can significantly improve buyers’ physical
conditions. In other words, these rules can secure the safety as well as nutritional values of the products which directly affect the users’ health. These laws can control the quality of the food by observing the manufacturing process or judging the factories’ conditions; therefore, before approaching the consumers, all food has been seriously taken into consideration. For instance, establishing food policies can prevent factories from using chemicals or pesticides. According to recent research, by using biological techniques for agriculture, there is a dramatic fall in the number of food-related diseases. Besides, in spite of being time-consuming, these systems are environmentally friendly and significantly improve the local health thanks to the reduction in global warming or greenhouse effects.
On the one hand, if governments establish laws on food labels, it will undoubtedly raise the health standards. By labeling detailed information, the consumers will be able to choose suitable products for daily needs. Specifically, different people have their own physical conditions that require particular nutrition such as calories or various types of vitamins; therefore, these new policies can improve the citizens’ health. Moreover, labeling food information can reduce a large number of allergic diseases because the buyers will know and avoid them while purchasing.
Summarily, health care is a serious issue and requires attention from both governments and local residents so laws should be established to remind and raise the people’s awareness about their own health. In my opinion, the advantages of health policies outweigh the negative impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...policies outweigh the negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75075987842 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0791038676 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589665653495 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8860255824 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26215685475 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853564860668 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463893615801 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156140868644 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428428231918 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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