The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the alternation of generations belonging to the honey bees, which extends approximately 34 to 36 days.
In general, the typical life cycle of the honey bee consists of 4 stages, according to their morphology. In the first stage, the bee exists as an egg. Later on, it grows up to larva, pupa, and adult sequentially.
As shown in the diagram, the honey bee wheel of life initiates when the eggs are laid. Ordinarily, one reproductive period of the bee occurs in three days, and the females can lay one to two eggs inside the hives, which will take them about nine to ten days to hatch. During the hatching, the larva escapes the egg after five days. Subsequently, the nymph casts off the hair triple between seven to nine days. As they continue developing, the young adult emerges and gradually becomes mature over four days. Afterward, the cycle is repetitive.
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site 84
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults 76
- Many people believe that zoos are cruel others believe that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The bar chart gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80392156863 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62536905778 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1048625481 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106249367608 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045812485767 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554384707823 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726469480648 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175309829104 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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