Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is critical important for people to obey the rules of societies. Some people might argue about the rules nowadays are too strict to follow. However, in my opinion, I claim that the rules are easier to obey than before. I feel this way for two main reasons that I will explore in my following essay.

First of all, thanks to the economy boost and improve. Young people has more choices in this generation. For example, in my country, Taiwan, the economy is way better than several decades ago. Major people earn enough money to live in a high quality of life. In this case, young people have more options to choose which they are going to do in the future, because they don't need to consider the money of their family. My experience is the best illustration of this. When I told my parents about my dream is to study abroad, they all supported my decisions and said that they will pay the tuition for me. In contrast, if my parents asked my grandparents whether they could study abroad, the answer is defintely "NO". In that time, family didn't have extra money to afford the cost of study abroad. Moreover, the society expects that young people need to stay at their hometown to help their family to earn money.

Secondly, thanks to the advanced technologies that make cultures around the world influence each other easily. In this case, people's perspectives and concepts will be changed. For example, in Asia, women should get married before they are thirty years old. If you didn't get married before thirty, the expectation of society will make you feel stessful. Still, after the technologies improved, Western cultures remix with Asian traditional cultures. The expectations of societies had changed. Due to the concepts and rules become more flexible now, more and more young people choose not to get into marriage and stay single for their whole life. Furthermore, the same-sex love becomes more acceptable in Asia.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the rules today are more easier and flexible for young people to obey.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
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Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87428571429 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46251240544 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8637814314 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1739130435 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2173913043 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4347826087 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208114222558 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609936352684 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622263575106 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148230411356 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608219079489 0.0645574589148 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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