Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome the stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some experts have believed that to relieve daily stress, the best way is allocating a certain amount of time in a day to definitely nothing. This essay will elaborate on the advantages and drawbacks of this statement and represent why I strongly disagree.
Doing nothing at a particular time in daily life might make individuals lazy. People’s attitude to the daily tension and stress would be escaping from it; therefore, every gap in order to be away from this bothersome situation would be extended much more than the time that everyone expects. This temporary rest may become a long rest so, returning to the regular daily basis would be very difficult. In addition, this rest would induce a feeling of being useless. Spending time without any activity may increase the feeling of being empty. Activities have numerous effects on people, and being a useful person in life motivates everyone not to stop doing things in their daily life. People working hard during days feel much better when they review their days.
On the other hand, medicating a particular time in a day without any activity may reduce job-related stress. Negative thoughts would be gone by this rest, and in a short time, people would be fresh and ready to restart their life’s activities free of any stress. Besides, this short rest may have plenty of physical benefits alongside mental ones and can regulate the stimulator and inhibitor factors related to the pressure. However, the effects of this way of being away from daily tension would not be long-term, and using medications and having special sessions with an appropriate psychologist would have more permanent influences.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that taking a rest without doing a positive activity would be very addictive and starting back to the life basis may be more difficult.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05610561056 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59774761111 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2376212054 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113308052413 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502735880992 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505256618342 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815457365028 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181548524043 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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