Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays the host of people emphasis the importance of foreign languages. Some of them, including me, have argued that work and travel are the exclusive grounds for learning a non-native language, while others think otherwise.
On the one hand. individuals may not find quality time to allocate learning other languages. In this fast-changing world, they have hectic lifestyles. To be precise, people have to work over 8 hours and usually are in competition with other companies and workers to meet deadline. So that if people have chance to find free time, presumably they would deal with other personal issues like spending time with their families and friends. Besides, money is a vital matter to learning foreign language. In some countries language courses include huge fortunes. Individuals who live in impoverished areas suffer from financial issues and the large number of them to make ends meet have to work overtime. Consequently, they could not afford to pay fees for these courses.
On the other hand, there are individuals learning other foreign languages just for personal fulfilment. They have sense of curiosity and are drawn by foreign institutions, cultures and countries so that to access this information, they would have to pursue any non-native books and news which motivates them learn other foreign languages. Furthermore, with having basic knowledge of other non-native language, individuals could easily expand their circle of friends. As a result of mass media, people could make friends with other people who speak different language by social networking and sending instant messages, which could play a crucial role in strengthening social bond. however, they could use translated version of books or news to be familiar with various aspects of other nations and adopt other captivating ways to make friends, like mutual friends.
In conclusion, I believe that because of issues with time and money, people could give priority to learning non-native language only when they have work and travel purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35825545171 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69801715908 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6589499691 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.176470588 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238915073667 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879058217462 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708150909916 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172034737836 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013202674496 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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