Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome the stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the
day doing absolutely nothing.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays life is stressful and people try to comfort themselves in any way possible. I absolutely disagree with a
number of psychologists who say that individuals should do nothing in a part of each day to beat stress because of
issues with time and effectiveness.
Most people today have no time in their daily lives to spend doing nothing. They have to wake up early each
morning, go to work for at least eight to ten hours, and spend the rest of the day dealing with other routine issues
such as other jobs they do, the problems of their family members and so on. All of these things take up so much time
and there is no time left for them to avoid doing anything.
Furthermore, doing nothing does not actually help resolve the causes of stress. When a person rests and does
nothing, he does not deal with what is causing him to become stressed, such as the household chores he has not
done yet, homework for school or college, or arguments with others. So when he goes back to his normal life, he
realizes that those issues are still real and have not changed. He also realizes that he has lost some of the time he
could have spent dealing with them, which can cause even more stress.
Some may argue that doing nothing gives the brain time to relax and recover, which helps it to become more
efficient in dealing with stressful situations and problems. However, people have enough time to relax and recover
during the night when they sleep, so it is not necessary to spend more time resting during the day.
In conclusion, I believe it is not a good idea for people to allocate some time every day to doing nothing in order to
decrease stress since they do not have enough time for this and it does not deal with the causes of stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 99, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nged. He also realizes that he has lost some of the time he could have spent dealing with ...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...h can cause even more stress. Some may argue that doing nothing gives the brain time...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, at least, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50778816199 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22667133546 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520249221184 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7788483105 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220055073826 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978625400745 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062930247699 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080206761386 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591606482652 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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