It is a harsh reality of today's era that in some countries people have to leave their home countries due to violence or some natural disasters, in these cases should rich countries accept those refugees and provide them facilities like food, housing and so on? I totally agree with this statement.
Apparently, the most predominant reason is that rich countries have all the required resources those are enough for providing shelter to homeless people. To be more precise, some countries are not capable to help their citizens. This is the main reason that individuals are forcefully leave their birth place.In this situation only developed nations can support those individuals. For example, recently in Afghanistan almost 95% people are suffering because of Taliban's terrorism. However, USA supporting Afghan people and providing them home and basic assistance.
Furthermore, when one country help other country for surviving in difficult circumstances by providing them financial help and asylum, then it create better relationships with other countries. Not only this but also build a great image in front of other nations. Moreover, by seeing it others countries get inspection and they also do some efforts and give them protection. However, after this all countries want to make better relationship with that countries. It will not only increase export and import, but also provide shelter to needy people. Hence, it becomes a great example for others and create a peaceful environment globally.
To conclude, when affluent countries help refugees, then it provide some opportunities to under privileged people's for betterment in their life. If every country do some effort to save humanity on earth especially those are able to help, then without any doubt the earth will become heaven.
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- Some people say that every human being can create art for example painting Others think only the people born with the ability can create art discuss both view and give your opinion 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37455830389 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74394765089 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7745277377 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211164986256 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691259089026 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593234746808 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136494131079 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735809795792 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.