Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Abortion in today's generation has become a huge debate to account for. In recent times, it has become really easy to get an abortion because of the rise in new medical technologies. In virtue of this, the scale of abortion is drastically rising upwards. In my view, abortion should be made legalised in the country as it will empower women to make the decision of bringing a new life on this planet or not.
A philosopher has quoted " Children are a gift from God", which is phenomenally right. However, getting aborted is quite a contrary act. Although society is against the concept of abortion because of religious beliefs, while there are many reasons for women to abort, like medical issues or acceptance from society, etc. But none of them are in concern with the society and the decision is taken into an account by themselves or partners consent. For instance, young girls are married at an early age in society due to which they bear a child at an early stage of their life. As bearing a child could be a risk factor for the life of the girl, the family is least concerned about the same as for them abortion is against their belief.
Meanwhile, being a parent, no doubt could be an immense responsibility in one's life. Additionally, a plethora of concerns also takes a toll on their lives in regard to emotional, physical and financial status. Growing a new life could be a very high-budget affair. For instance, a plethora of teenage girls is debarred from getting an abortion as they are not independent. This has led to leaving their children in foster care. Since they are not allowed to see their child, these kids lack the nurture from their mothers. A lot of children living in foster homes are left in neglected conditions and abused which are leading to a lot of mental trauma in their early childhood. This is something which no child should suffer at an early age.
In a word, abortion cannot be the only solution to the problem in this world. Subsequently, women should be given the legal right to choose whether she is ready and capable to bring a new life in this world or not. Hence, it is their right to decide what is best for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, while, as for, for instance, no doubt, in my view, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60051546392 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54454809295 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518041237113 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.932932623 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16621271496 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546499513391 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484988277089 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116290246423 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518394281561 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.