Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
Global Warming has become a global issue and a big threat for our next generations. One of the reasons is the massive development in the cities that lessens a green space in some areas. Therefore, many people think that planting trees in towns or cities is far more needed than building more houses. In my opinion, although we need to take action in preserving our Earth, a house development can be also important especially in the crowded cities.
On the one hand, a green life movement has been taking in action by many people who concern with the major issue. Many big cities and towns have small green spaces which impacted good air production. Thus, those who live in megapolitans have a small chance to breath unpolluted air. For example, people who live in Jakarta, which always be in top 10 capital city with bad pollution only get 30% of chance in breathing health air. Also, a low quality air can worsen our body health. So that, people in towns need some green spaces in order to retain their health.
On the other hand, the government cannot resist the further development in the capitals. Most of big towns have big population. If the governments reduce house building, many people will face difficulty in finding a private place. Instead of reducing a quota of residences, the government could organize a regulation of green buildings. For example, house developers only build vertical houses with green building requirements. The vertical houses should be built with a good vetilation so the residents do not need to install more air conditioners.
To sum up, the population is getting bigger and the green spaces are getting smaller. However, we cannot resist the further changes in the house development. As a solution, the house developers, which are regulated by the government can innovate the houses with green life approaches.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95512820513 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66496339835 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4557311779 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3684210526 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2317925933 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706120468813 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087679480727 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145206023292 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755406110855 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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