You have seen an advertisement for a parttime volunteer to work with out pay for an organisation that helps local children. You would like to do this work
Write a letter to the head of the organisation. In your letter
Say why you are interested in this type of work
Explain why you think you are suitable
Give details of when you could do this work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to your advertisement dated 04.02.2021 in Canada Times for a parttime volunteer to help child.
I am a student and studying for a degree in Education and working with children would help me with my education. I teach children in my block painting and craft work. I am sure I can help kids at your office.
I am good for this job as I can commit my entire summer vacation to helping at your organisation. Also, since my study is for teaching young kids and in final year, I am suitable for this position.
As mentioned, I am ready to work for the entire summer starting from 12 of June to 3rd of September. I can be flexible and work in different shifts too.
Kindly consider my profile and give me an opportunity to help the kids. I will early wait for your reply.
Regards,
Taniya
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to...
^^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n in my block painting and craft work. I am sure I can help kids at your office....
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m sure I can help kids at your office. I am good for this job as I can commit my...
^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill early wait for your reply. Regards, Taniya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41401273885 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5906581393 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7270593251 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274253522099 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998304119478 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623222874032 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160607579414 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583265106386 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to...
^^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n in my block painting and craft work. I am sure I can help kids at your office....
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m sure I can help kids at your office. I am good for this job as I can commit my...
^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill early wait for your reply. Regards, Taniya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41401273885 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5906581393 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7270593251 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274253522099 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998304119478 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623222874032 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160607579414 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583265106386 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.