The chart shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
Given is the chart comparing four nations, in terms of the levels of air pollution caused by three main factors in 2021.
Overall, China was considered to be at the highest level of pollution, whereas Australia was at the lowest. Another noticeable feature is that transport was the main factor causing the pollution of all countries.
Specifically, in this year, China suffered from air pollution the most when the total amount of pollution was recorded at 210 PPM, with the industrial sector being the dominant contributor (80 PPM). Japan followed the similar pattern, but its total amount was over half that of China. Particularly, the figures for industry and transport were above 40 PPM and 30 PPM respectively, while pollutants from electricity generation contributed a negligible amount.
Regarding America, the transport sector was the main cause of air pollution, recording an excessive level of below 60 PPM compared to other categories. Australia, whose sectors shared relatively the same amount of below 20 PPM, was regarded as the least polluted nation. Notably, the transport sector averagely made the largest contribution to air pollution with the total data of nearly 180 PPM.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...causing the pollution of all countries. Specifically, in this year, China suffer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29473684211 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84870578575 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5592345297 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163977381538 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868650484984 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908923153792 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141186296205 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996521627353 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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