You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.
What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Children are quite different than adults. There is obviously the age gap and the maturity that comes with age, but children are unique in expressing their needs and their actions can vary according to the societal settings.
Firstly, children are more open to show their emotions and express their feelings, whereas adults have to maintain some sort of facade in front of others. This can be both good and bad depending upon the scenerio. You can find younglings crying in a funeral because he lost his toys. But as they become older, they become more aware of situations and conduct themselves accordingly.
The second change that comes with age is the understanding of consequences. Youngsters are less aware how their action has effects on others. For example, many teens drop out of schools or run out of homes only to regret their decision later in life. On the other hand, the young ones begin to set their own goals and dreams and take responsibilties of themselves as they become older and wiser. Approximately, 83 teens out of 100s are more likely to get a part-time job to support their studies from high school to college.
Stubborness is listed as a very common trait among toddlers but they begin to go to schools or pre-schools, they become less stubborn and more kind reported by many mothers in one survey in the USA.
Finally, one last behaviourial change I would like to mention is the attraction toward opposite gender and its expression. Children often do not identify themselves as male or female and do not posses any romantic feelings for each other. However, that changes as they hit puberty. Boys tend to show their affection toward the opposite gender by tickling or pulling hairs. Girls show their feelings by blushing or trying to look best in front of their crushes. But as they become adults, their expression and defination of attraction changes. Adults who court each other are more free, comfortable and truthful with one another.
Children will definitely go through a lot of changes and ultimately become a working and stable part of society. So, as the older generation, it is our duty to provide the best care to the newer generation so that they can embrace the good and betterness of themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
Children are quite different than adults. There is obviously the age gap ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, whereas, for example, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89005235602 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61786910906 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2955801447 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9523809524 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146579637347 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450754881439 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334968408724 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761136273291 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362868548712 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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