The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The provided plan illustrates the redevelopmental changes to an airport that will occur in the following year.

Overall, the entire structure of the airport will face some type of changes that will include increasing the number of entry gates and shops within the floor.

Now there are only eight gates, in a rectangular arrangement, which grant access to the inner part of the airport and are connected through walkways. But in the next year 10 more gates (making the nubmber of gate total 18) will be constructed in a Y-shaped zone with sky train transportation. Finally, few new shops will be built on the left of "Security and Passport Control".

Currently, only a cafe is available next to the chek-in center for the departing passengers whereas the incoming ones do not have any access to any shops at all. As the location of the check-in center will be changed, a new "Bag drop" zone will be added in its previous location for the departing passengers. The cafe will move closer to the departing gates. On the ther side, several new shops, a cafe and an ATM booth will be constructed for the arrivals as well. The right side next to the arriving gates will be extended so that a car hiring shop can be opened as well.

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2021-12-14 Humoyun Rahimov 89 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, well, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76958525346 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77271574461 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2841071052 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190610999597 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847828375099 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608924391431 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144235301151 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650232189 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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