The plans illustrate the structure of an airport now and some changes after improvement next year. It can be seen that, the number of gates will increase twice and bag drop, ATM, care hire stations will be built by constructors during months.
Nowadays, there is a small walkway in the north of airport but architechtures is planning to build a long sky train way. In addition, this sky train way will be covered with 18 gates and shops will be opend on the left part of airport. Although huge changes are predicting the place of security passport control, pasport control customs and cafe will not be replaced next year. Today, people can use 2 doors in airport when they are entering or exiting and the percentage of doors will rise two-fold after a year.
In plan, different buildings, services will be made. For instance, registration is located on the left side of the airport which is near the security passport control, but it will removed to the centre of the airport. Moreover, builders is going to built the second cafe which will be in the south western of the airport. Car hire station will be constructed in the south-eastern area and near there, planners will built ATM in order to be comfortable to exchange money for people next year.
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 92
- Nowadays culture is much the same all around the world when compared to previous times Do you think this a positive or negative development 92
- In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 78
- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year 89
- Scientist have been warning for many years that to protect our environment we have to limit use of energy in our daily lives despite warning many people do not pay attention to this What are the reasons and how people can encourage to save environment 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e built by constructors during months. Nowadays, there is a small walkway in th...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doors will rise two-fold after a year. In plan, different buildings, services w...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remove'
Suggestion: remove
... security passport control, but it will removed to the centre of the airport. Moreover,...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...airport. Moreover, builders is going to built the second cafe which will be in the so...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...tern area and near there, planners will built ATM in order to be comfortable to excha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72146118721 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55327505915 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.882974318 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271862389605 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127098308927 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846035256143 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209329206723 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342872671914 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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