The graphs below show the number of men and women in full and part time employment in Australia between 1973 and 1993 Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The line graphs illustrate the percentage of male and female in full and part-time job in Australia from 1973 and 1993.
It can be seen that, most men between 20 and 40 worked in full-time job when only about 5% of males selected part-time positions at these ages in Australia in 1993.

However, there was a slight decrease in the rate of full-time males, majority of men worked in full-time jobs after 20 years. In 1993, the percentage of women who were 20 years old reached a peak ( about 54%) and fluctuation was seen between 25-60 years old women in full-time job between 1973 and 1993.

After two decades, the proportion of part-time male workers increased twice and 25% of adults worked in part-time positions in Australia in 1993. In addition, most men whose ages were between 25-60 almost did not worked in part-time jobs in the given period.To compar, vast of women preferred to work in part-time job. Especially, 35% of female workers who were under 50 worked in part-time job in Australia.
Overall, most men worked in full-time job when female workers chose part-time jobs in Australia between 1973 and 1993

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... 35% of female workers who were under 50 worked in part-time job in Australia. O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82901554404 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51473148993 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471502590674 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5566870452 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277870396186 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169083461786 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486006821962 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208823906548 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266109188925 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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