Nowadays, in many countries the percentage of young adults is considerably huge, compared with the proportion of older people. Although, there are several disadvantages of reducing the number of old people, I strongly feel that, young generation plays more important role in our globalised age.
On the one hand, people usually face to serious problems due to they do not have right experience to solve in their lives. In this situation, everyone should discuss their problems with older people because old people saw this kind of circumstances and they know how tackle the issue. In addition, grandparents impact on children's behaviour and personality. It can be seen that childre who are under control of thier grandparents are more polite and sociable. If old peaople do not regulate family members, many conflicts will lead to lose relationship among relatives. The main factor is that conventional habits are disappearing around the world because old people are so few and they do not pay attention to activities of youngsters. As a result, various changes are being made by young people in every subject.
On the other hand, technology is enhancing year by year and it gives a lot of opportunities to young people to show off themselves. It is clear that youn adults are so innovative and flexible however the do not follow traditional habits. These days, many children and adolescents are creating unique gadgets, different methods when old people work for another factory in order to earn money. In fact, young people can work a lot (12-14 hours a day) and they are more creative and effective during the work. So many companies prefer young workers to older people.
In conclusion, a sharp increase of the number of young adults is so crucial and productive for many societies, although old people have their own position in every country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... are so innovative and flexible however the do not follow traditional habits. These da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06535947712 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77700104481 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6398029674 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220594690569 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696257565681 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052894838707 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140218066035 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394412511 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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