In globalized century, promoters tell audience that thier products are the best when they are advertising their brand. Although there are few disadvantages of this advertisment, I strongly feel that, this method is so beneficial for people and businesses.
These days, companies can advert their products without problems due to improvement of the Internet and technology. But it sometimes effects to audience inappopriately. For instance, people usually suffer from advertisments which are during a film or people watch advertising before
starting video on You Tube. In this situation, people feel the worst passion against promoting product and they do not want to lose their attentions. In addition, many companies manufacture new products everyday and it is not so vital to emphasise it. Because evary customer Knows how to purchase goods in many societies.
The other side of the coin, advertising of companies is productive for the population of government. If busiresses tries to make new product every day, competition will increase among companies. As a result, customers will have more oppurtunities when they are selecting something in markets. It is clear that, everyone buys reliable product and the social media is the best place to get customer's loyalty in XXI age.
Moreover, quality of products will rise because promoters should response to their adverts. There is no doubt, businessmen have huge responsibility while they are advertising theer product
In conclusion, advertisment of new products impacts on people's social lives and brand's status these years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49590163934 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01125218927 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.225512554 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245873502443 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781083561919 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523659727837 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127348654861 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320190628039 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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