The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. Do you agree or disagree?
Thanks to the rapid technological advancements, it is now simpler to use AI to detect and prevent criminal activity. People believe that this improvement will aid in the reduction of crime. I totally agree with this idea and in this essay, I will discuss and try to draw some conclusions.
To begin, with the aid of trail cameras for security monitoring, finding a criminal has never been easier. Security cameras are increasingly widespread on the street, at malls, and even in your own house. You can view it on a smartphone, tablet, or computer from anywhere using an internet connection. Lots of home security cameras are motion-activated, which means they will record and alarm you whenever they detect movement. Police also can use those videotapes later to find and catch the lawbreaker.
Another reason why I agree with this idea is the use of DNA testing technologies in identifying criminals and prosecute the perpetrators. In most situations, DNA is used to solve crimes in one of two ways. A sample of a suspect's DNA can be matched to evidence from the crime scene in situations where a suspect has been identified. The findings of this comparison may aid in determining whether or not the suspect was the perpetrator of the crime. Biological evidence from the crime scene can be examined and linked to offender profiles in DNA databases to assist identify the culprit in situations where a suspect has not yet been identified. DNA databases may also be used to correlate crime scene evidence to other crime scenes.
To summarize, advances in science have led to the introduction of life-saving automation. As I stated before in the essay, I believe that technological innovations have greatly benefitted in the decrease of crime rates since they have made detection much easier.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... this comparison may aid in determining whether or not the suspect was the perpetrator of the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02006688963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99549069573 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7661419731 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255572710466 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776341696164 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05201910674 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146249092275 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458461875537 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... this comparison may aid in determining whether or not the suspect was the perpetrator of the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02006688963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99549069573 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7661419731 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5625 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255572710466 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776341696164 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05201910674 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146249092275 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458461875537 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.