Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
A sector of community claims that learning art is neccesary for children at school whereas others would argue that it is time-consuming. This essay will discuss both views. From my point of view, learrning art is not very important.
To begin with, to a handful of people, art is consider as pratical subject for children at school and there is no skepticism such a statement. Firstly, infusing arts into curriculum is considered as good cornerstone for young generation to learn more and maintain culuture heritage which is a precious tresure of previous generation. Furthermore, thanks to arts, it helps children with wellbeing and healthy through creativity. For instance, according to the TALE study conducted that most of london students said that arts lessonss acted as outlet for realising pressure of stuty as well as streess of everyday life.
Despite the above argument, it is widely believed that studying art is time-consuming. At first, art learners have to start from the very beginning and this is important for the reason that art is a subject which gives learners more exposures to other humanities subjects and realating to them to draw conclusion or criticical evaluation of diffirent artworks. In addition, it is clear that learners will extend more time if they only learn art lessons and not concentrate on learning art bussiness. To illustrate this regard further, in this contemporary world, it is witnessed that the amount of money that artists earned is less than those who work as scientists or bussinessman.
In pithy, it is believed that learning art at school is vital while other people opine that it is a waste of time. I personally believe that art is a needless activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...in with, to a handful of people, art is consider as pratical subject for children at sch...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
Suggestion: to art; to be
...ill extend more time if they only learn art lessons and not concentrate on learning...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06737588652 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88095416251 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4706253922 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301483721498 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106602012759 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818469762894 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200132102553 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509624735382 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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