Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
The issue here revolves around the belief or perspectives regarding success in the creative fields like painting, fiction writing and film making. Some people believe that sucess in these fields require hardwork however there are some other group of people who believe that sucess here requires talent and cannot be learned. The issue here requires comprehensive analysis before conclusion.
It is rightly said, there's nothing in this world which a human being cannot achieve. For example, in painting there are different type of strokes which has to be painted accordingly to create a perfect painting. And these strokes can be practised. With more practise, the strokes develop and hence the painting improves. Similary filmmaking skills might improve for a writer with spending a lot of time reading articles, stories or other people's work. Does this imply can every person become an artist.
There's also creative IQ which helps in creative fields. For example, fiction writing involves imagination of fictional characters and the relation ship between them, this definately requires a lot of imagination which is claimed that cannot be learned through hardwork. Same goes for actors, there are facial expressions which involves creativity and cannot be practised. Even for painters, certain type of painting hides deeper meaning which requires talent to think beyond normal scenary painting or a portrait.
So a talented artist doesn't need to put in any efforts then? This is definitely wrong. In some sense talent, creative skills are important to become an artist however they also require to put in etra efforts to gain success in the field. Because, every field not just creative fields in general has too much competition hence to stand out it is important to put efforts in the right place at the right time to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, as to, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23389830508 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51368218039 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4059456348 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8235294118 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342076083449 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090159940209 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824808119224 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195923441155 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954867526825 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.