People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
It is undeniable that environmental problems have always been a controversial topic for all citizens around the world. Many people believe one solution to this would be for the government to raise the price of petrol. While I agree with this opinion, I also think that there are other solutions to improve the quality of the environment.
On the one hand, national authorities play a vital role in environmental issues. What I mean is that the rise in petrol prices may lead to less consumption of car owners and motor drivers. Therefore, the government should take action in improving and expanding public transport provision to encourage and enhance the use of public transportation, as many people still need to travel to work, to school or to hospitals. Moreover, from the perspective of freight services, more goods would have to be transported by rail rather than by truck. Both these measures would cut down the emissions from vehicles and help to reduce the greenhouse effect.
On the other hand, some other solutions can be taken into account which would be more effective in the long term to tackle environmental issues. The local authorities in Vietnam, for instance, has imposed some new regulations to strictly control the driving test. What’s more, the government can support more environmentally friendly transports like using electronic cars, motorbikes or bicycles. As a result, the air quality can be improved because of the reduction of exhaust fumes.
In conclusion, although an increase in the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles would be a useful measure to improve the environment, other solutions should also be
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14126394052 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92374396433 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4368106668 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267831383736 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840187264067 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835843925557 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183075411351 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994618800895 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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