New Parents Should Receive Training In Parenting

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New Parents Should Receive Training In Parenting

These days, training courses in parenting have become increasingly popular. In this regard, there is an opinion that young parents should take these courses for a good upbringing of the children. As for me, I believe that this approach is the most correct.
On the one hand, parenting courses are useful for new parents. Firstly, these courses can help parents learn the basic principles of parenting, as well as the main problem situations that require immediate decision-making. This knowledge will help avoid accidents due to the parental ignorance.
Secondly, courses will help not only mothers but also fathers to actively participate in the upbringing of the child. Often fathers are not so involved in upbringing because of ignorance of how to care for a child. And thanks to the course, they will learn more useful information and will no longer be afraid to make a mistake in the care of the child.
On the other hand, there is an opinion about the optional completion of parenting training courses. This is due to the high cost of such courses. Most parents cannot afford to take such courses because of their poor financial situation. In addition, such courses do not guarantee that the upbringing of children will ultimately be good. In other words, courses are not always teached by certified specialists, which subsequently leads to the incorrect presentation of material to parents.
In conclusion, I want to emphasize that despite all the disadvantages of parenting courses, they will still be useful and will give a basic understanding of parenting, which can be supplemented with their knowledge and ideas.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... presentation of material to parents. In conclusion, I want to emphasize that de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as for, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87761020832 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2437349868 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228678812956 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869110464576 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919417902928 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133275378816 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894183331797 0.056905535591 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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