Write about the following topic:
Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The issue about environment has been always in debate for many years, and the problems about the earth is becoming more seriously in modern society. As for there exsits different kinds of issues, therefore how to distinguish the importance of some certain problems has been a vital topic.
Some people hold the view that a significantly big issue is to stopping the disappearance of special plants and wild lives. They may have the following three reasons for that. First of all, they believe that plants and animals have played a cruel role in terms of human’s development and growth as they supply the food and energy for a quite long time. Secondly, the disappearing creatures have great values and research potentials for the students and scientist who major in medical and biology although the minor kinds of plants and animals like certain weeds and tigers are in danger. Thirdly, humans can know earth better though taking research into the particular creatures.
However, the others have the point that people are facing a lot of other environmental problems which are obviously more serious than protecting the plants and animals. Because of the air and water pollution are widely exsit in most of countries all over the world, people must stress the importance of resources saving and environment protecting. For example, government are making much progress in instructing citizens to obey the rules of rubbish-classification and taking public transports in daily life in order to solve the problem.
From my point of view, there are many environmental issues other than plants and animals protecting in current society. Officials and community members ought to pay much attention to those problems relating to the existence of humans first like the air pollution and energy shortages instead of others, because people need to live further then they can to handle the living problems of other creatures in the planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...gers are in danger. Thirdly, humans can know earth better though taking research int...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...and water pollution are widely exsit in most of countries all over the world, people must stress ...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...rs, because people need to live further then they can to handle the living problems ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, as for, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17515923567 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7606836277 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8188999327 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246339998082 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863715078521 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05693641122 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14652883082 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278558356 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.