With the increasing use of and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people use to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
At the mercy of the ever accelerated updating of science and technology, there are rapid changes in all aspects of our everyday life, for example, machinery. People prefer to employ machines to do work. Does this trend make our life better or worse?
There are absolutely many advantages of this situation. Firstly, some repetitive tasks that performed by machines are more efficient and accurate than performed by humans. For example, photocopiers are able to produce hundreds of copies of documents without any errors within just 10 seconds. It is a much better way than writing the same document by hands. Also, machines are capable of doing exhausting work that people used to do. Unlike in the old days, washing machines are now employed to do laundry instead of hand washing. These machines shorten the time that people spend in housework or others, thus, people can save their time to relax.
However, the extensive use of machines brings drawbacks in the meantime. To start with, it may consume a large amount of electricity or gas. Nowadays, people prefer to use dish-washing machines because they are efficient and convenient. However, it is undeniable that the electricity and water for running dish-washing machines are much more than hand wash. It leads to a large amount of resource wastage. And the machines need a large amount of money for maintenance, too. Besides, if people completely rely on those machines, they could lose the ability of working. If this continues, there will be more people who are jobless because of them in the future.
From the discussion above, the invention of machines definitely brings convenient to our lives. But in the meantime, there are disadvantages that we cannot neglect. Only if the machines are properly utilized, can our lives benefit from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08754208754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68234600752 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6092606671 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.9523809524 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285823331618 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807033218509 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766255293509 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148928015312 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774069804956 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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