With the increasing use of and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people use to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In this day and age, many people have witnessed the power of new technology which vigorously affect them in every aspects of life. Because digital era is continuously growing, various latest machines are now have the ability to perform people’s work. In this essay, the perks and drawbacks of this trend will be discussed.
To begin with, there are two main advantages of using robots: alleviate the hard job and make more profits. Firstly, digital machines can replace the workers and help them to protect their health system. Moreover, having robots working, occupations do not have to concern about overtime duties. Secondly, cyborgs do not require break time so they can function for a long time. By that way of meaning, they can make a greater quantity in a short amount of time and work more precisely than human. For example, robots can produce mobile phones faster and link the phone accessories more accurate, which benefits the digital enterprises.
On the other hand, cyborgs may take people’s job opportunity. Jobs such as florists, mechanics often have low salary and these duties can be easily done by robots, so people could face the losing of their jobs. eople will be worried, but in terms of money and manufacturing it will be plus for companies. What's more, technology can be used as a weapon and make a combat between countries. Nowadays, every strong country put forth an effort into developing new technologies in order to be prepared for war. For instance, the USA is a leader in strike technologies and it increases a strain between countries and respectively, others do not want to be last.
In conclusion, although new technology can help reduce the hard-working and increase the money for companies, its negative side of supporting wars and preventing people from doing their work is bad for the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Eople
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00325732899 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6835488626 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625407166124 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7520726456 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272280234056 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789653912232 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589831855939 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162318100407 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652053307655 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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