you are the relationship manager t of a world class car-making company. write a letter to your customer who bought the car some time back. In your letter, Introduce yourself, say something about the feature of the car, request feedback from the customer.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to get some information about the car you purchased from our reputed company.
We are delighted to have you as our premium customer and welcome you to the Hyundai family. On the behalf of a company, I am your contact to solve your queries related to the post-sale service.
A month ago, you purchased the latest model of Crete. It is one of the best cars in this segment with superior quality and handling service. Not only this, due to its safety and convenience, its sale is inclining day by day.
Since you have been driving this vehicle for over a week, therefore I would like to request you to enlighten me about your experience and any suggestion if you have regarding this, so that we can provide a solution accordingly as it will come in immensely handy on many fronts for our feature service to improve the obstacles facing by our customers. I have also attached a self-addressed envelope along with the feedback form.
Looking forward to hearing a positive and prompt response from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Rajiv Sharma
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- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion 61
- Young people prefer listening to music rather than listening to the news on the radio Is this positive or a negative trend provide reasons and examples for your opinion 84
- Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience 78
- You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have some problems and can t stay for the whole course Write a letter to the course director In your letter explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out whether a refun 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8085106383 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60748999504 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664893617021 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3030248568 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227332974648 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816081712794 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604729745687 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124553935378 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070209745163 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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